Blog 11
The Fourth Lesson
For the fourth lesson I continued using the text Pros and
Cons: Increasing minimum wages. Since in
lesson 2 and lesson 3 we had written summaries about the 2 articles and the
students were familiar with the text, I decided to work towards a persuasive
writing assignment. The text was
invaluable because it made the students excited about the topic. When in lesson 3 they read about the cons of
raising minimum wage, I think that they were impressed with the arguments made
in this article. So in order to find out
if the students had been swayed one way or another, I went for a persuasive
piece that allowed them to express themselves.
When Jason and I met Monday before class, Jason helped me to
construct a stellar visual organizer through redoing my evidence collection
handout. He created a box at the top
which allowed for entering the main claim.
This was followed by 3 more boxes that were asking for evidence and
explanation. Jason’s reconstructed
handout made a huge difference. It
really provided a tool that broke down the writing so that it was almost
automatic once the information for the handout had been collected.
While I was giving the lesson, Jason did something different
than he had done before. He jumped in at
appropriate times guiding me about things that I was not getting. What I understood very well after giving the
lesson is that the concept of claim, evidence and explanation had to be
explained many, many times. Jason recommended
that I start with an I do, you do, we do approach. I went to the board and entered in an example
of a main claim which was followed by my example of evidence and
explanation. We then broke the class
down in groups so that they could fill out this handout together. I was surprised about how challenging this
was for them. But as I thought about it,
I have just taken a writing class in the fall semester with Mark McBeth. I remember being similarly confused while writing
my first academic paper in his class.
Jason and I both went around to the different groups helping to clarify
the claim, evidence and explanations we were asking from them. I then asked them to post their work on chart
paper. We continued to go over these
concepts while reading each other’s work.
Jason pointed out to me while they were posting their work on chart paper
that in many cases there was a hazy line between evidence and explanation. I tried to hone in on this confusion while we
were discussing each other charts.
To finish off the lesson, I asked the students to keep this
handout as we would be using it next week to complete the lesson with the
persuasive writing. I had them observe
that the handout was a map for how they were going to write the persuasive
piece next week.
Although I am teaching a fifth lesson next week, Jason
brought me deep into the teaching process.
I was really able to understand how a lesson needed to be scaffolded and
how by observing how I and the students were doing during the lesson, I was
able to understand when I could move on to the next step. This observation process is hard for a
neophyte educator to put into their teaching because you have to veer your
attention away from what you as a teacher have planned. You have to jump from your plan and really
try to see what is going on with the students.
What I loved about teaching this lesson is that Jason forced me to do
this.
In our class discussions about what had been posted on the
chart paper it became clear that many of them had been swayed by the cons
argument. I cannot wait to see next week’s
persuasive writing pieces.